Ancillary: Final Advert

I made two advert drafts to decide which one to use as my final ancillary. I wasn't sure about the placement of the reviews and so asked for feedback on facebook, which was very helpful.
Here are the two adverts...

Advert #1

Advert #2

Here's some of the feedback I got on advert #2...

Therefore advert #2 is now definitely going to be my final advert which I'm very pleased about. I think that it reflects my audience research and the tone of Jamie xx's music as well as tying in with the music video I have created.